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What the Cardinal's Man Believed

This is fan fiction. An original, unofficial story written by a contributor to this site, not by Alexandre Dumas. It is not part of the actual novel and should not be mistaken for Dumas's own writing.

The Comte de Rochefort had been called many things in the Cardinal's service: an agent, a creature, once, memorably, by a furious Gascon in an inn yard, a coward, which was the one insult Rochefort had actually resented, since a coward would not have stood in that yard at all, would have sent someone else to watch the road and report on the traveler in the yellow doublet. Rochefort had gone himself, as he went himself for anything that mattered, and he had watched the boy (because that was all d'Artagnan had been, that first afternoon, a boy with a temper too large for his purse) and he had formed, in the time it took to finish his wine, a judgment he never afterward had reason to revise.

The judgment was this: the boy was dangerous in the specific way that only the truly honest are dangerous. Not clever. Cleverness could be managed, bought, outmaneuvered, cleverness played by rules Rochefort understood in his marrow, having spent fifteen years in service to the most clever man in France. But d'Artagnan had looked at him across that inn yard with an expression Rochefort recognized from exactly one other place in his life, and it took him three days to place it: his own face, reflected in a shop window in Rouen, the morning after he had first understood what the word "loyalty" was actually going to cost him.

 

Rochefort did not think of himself as a villain, which was, he understood perfectly well, precisely what a villain would say, and he had made his peace with the irony decades ago. What he believed, and what he had believed since he was young enough that the belief still felt like a discovery rather than a habit, was that France was not, whatever poets and provincial nobility preferred to imagine, held together by honor. It was held together by information moving correctly and quickly to the people who needed it, and by a small number of men willing to do the unglamorous work of making sure it moved that way, at whatever cost to their own reputations among people who would never have to make the choices they made.

Richelieu had explained this to him once, early in his service, in terms Rochefort had never forgotten because they were the first terms anyone had ever offered him that actually matched what he'd observed of the world rather than what he'd been told to expect of it. "A kingdom," the Cardinal had said, "is not defended by men who duel over insults in inn yards, however prettily they do it. It is defended by men willing to be hated in rooms no one will ever write songs about." Rochefort had taken this as a vocation, in the way some men took holy orders, not gladly, exactly, but with the particular grim satisfaction of a man who has found the one description of his own nature that finally makes sense of it.

So when he watched d'Artagnan draw his sword three times in a single afternoon, against three different men, over three different trivial provocations he could easily have avoided with a moment's more patience, Rochefort did not see courage, or did not see only courage. He saw a young man who had not yet learned, had perhaps never been taught, growing up somewhere far enough from Paris that these lessons arrived late, if they arrived at all, that honor of that particular, showy kind was a luxury purchased at someone else's expense. Every duel d'Artagnan won made him more visible, and every ounce of visibility he accumulated was, sooner or later, going to be paid for by someone with less standing to survive the cost: a servant, a woman, a friend without a title to shield him.

Rochefort turned out, in the end, to be entirely correct about this, though it gave him no satisfaction to have been.

 

He had met men like d'Artagnan before, scattered across thirty years of service, and he had developed, out of necessity, a taxonomy of them. There were the ones who could be bought, which was the largest category by a comfortable margin and required no particular skill to identify, since money generally announced its own effectiveness within the first conversation. There were the ones who could be frightened, a smaller group, and a more useful one, since fear was cheaper than money and lasted, if properly maintained, considerably longer. And there was a third category, rare enough that Rochefort had met perhaps a dozen true examples of it in his entire career, which he privately thought of as the incorruptibles, not because they couldn't be bribed or frightened, though they generally couldn't, but because bribery and fear both assumed the man in question wanted something Rochefort could offer or threaten to take away, and the incorruptibles, infuriatingly, mostly didn't.

D'Artagnan was, by the time Rochefort had watched him operate for a full year, unmistakably in the third category, and Rochefort found this more troubling than any duel the boy might have fought him. A man who wanted money could be managed. A man who wanted advancement could be managed more easily still, since advancement was the Cardinal's to grant or withhold, and most ambitious men eventually discovered that the quickest route to the thing they wanted ran directly through cooperation with the people who controlled it. But a man who wanted, above every other consideration, to protect a specific small handful of people he'd decided to be loyal to: that man could not be managed at all. He could only be removed, or waited out, or, in the rarest and most uncomfortable cases, understood well enough to be avoided.

Rochefort chose understanding, not from any excess of sentiment, but because it was, in his professional judgment, the only strategy likely to work, and because understanding an enemy correctly was itself a form of respect he'd learned to extend even to people he'd have preferred, on balance, never to have encountered at all.

 

What Rochefort believed about Milady de Winter, because any honest account of what Rochefort believed had to eventually arrive at Milady, since she was the other fixed point around which most of his professional life had come to orbit, was more complicated, and he was aware that the complication reflected poorly on his own judgment rather than on hers. He had worked alongside her for years before he allowed himself to fully register what she was, and even then, the registering came less as revelation than as a slow accumulation of evidence he'd been declining, for reasons he did not entirely admire in himself, to add up.

She was, without question, the most effective agent the Cardinal had ever employed, more effective in her own way than Rochefort himself, since she could go places and extract things that a scarred man with an obvious history of violence never could. But effectiveness, Rochefort had come to understand too late to act on the understanding usefully, was not the same thing as reliability, and Milady's effectiveness was built on a foundation Rochefort eventually recognized, with the particular clarity of a man forced to see something he'd spent years successfully not looking at, as something closer to appetite than to principle. She did not serve the Cardinal's cause the way Rochefort served it, as a considered, costly, adult choice about what mattered more than his own comfort. She served it the way a river serves the sea: because the terrain happened, for now, to run that direction, and would go on running that direction only as long as nothing more interesting opened up downstream.

He did not warn Richelieu about this, which was, on reflection, the single professional failure Rochefort was most reluctant to examine closely in his later years. He told himself, at the time, that it wasn't his place, that the Cardinal saw further and more clearly than any agent in his service, including Rochefort, and had presumably already accounted for whatever risk Milady represented. He told himself this specifically because it was easier than telling himself the truth, which was that he had watched her operate for years with a species of professional admiration that had curdled, somewhere along the way, into something closer to fear, and that a man who had built his entire self-conception around not being afraid of anything found it very difficult to admit that one particular colleague unsettled him in a way that thirty years of dangerous work never had.

 

By the time the diamond studs affair had run its course and d'Artagnan had, against every reasonable expectation, outmaneuvered both Milady and, indirectly, Rochefort himself, the Comte found that his opinion of the young Gascon had shifted into a register he hadn't anticipated and didn't entirely welcome. It was not respect, precisely. Rochefort reserved that word for very few people, and mostly for men long dead. But it was something adjacent to respect, a recognition that the boy's incorruptibility, which Rochefort had initially catalogued as a weakness to be exploited, had turned out, across a sustained enough test, to function as something closer to a weapon. D'Artagnan could not be bought because he had already decided, apparently before Rochefort ever laid eyes on him, exactly what he valued and exactly what he'd pay to protect it, and a man who has already made that calculation is immune to the entire arsenal of persuasion Rochefort had spent his career mastering.

Rochefort did not change his own convictions on account of this. He still believed, on the day he finally reconciled with d'Artagnan under Louis XIV's altered court, a reconciliation he found, privately, almost comically anticlimactic after two decades of hostility, that France needed men willing to be hated in service of something larger than their own reputations, and that this need had not diminished merely because one particular Gascon had proven harder to manage than most. But he had come, by then, to understand something he would not have accepted from anyone else's mouth in his younger years: that there was more than one honest way to serve a cause larger than oneself, and that the difference between his own path and d'Artagnan's had never been a difference of conviction at all. It had only ever been a difference of which small, specific handful of people each man had decided, at some point too early in his life to fully examine the choice, was worth everything else.

Rochefort had chosen the Cardinal, and through the Cardinal, an idea of France too large to hold in his hands. D'Artagnan had chosen three friends and, eventually, a king. Rochefort was no longer entirely certain, looking back from the vantage of an old man who had outlived most of his own certainties, that the second choice had been the smaller one.

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