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Malicorne's Hour

This is fan fiction. An original, unofficial story written by a contributor to this site, not by Alexandre Dumas. It is not part of the actual novel and should not be mistaken for Dumas's own writing.

Malicorne had exactly one hour, by his own private calculation, to convince Mademoiselle de Montalais that the information he carried was worth the price he intended to ask for it, and he had learned, across several years of provincial legal training and considerably more years of careful observation of how court favor moved from hand to hand, that an hour was, properly used, an entirely adequate amount of time to change the entire shape of a man's prospects.

He was not, whatever his detractors in Orléans liked to suggest, a man without principle. He held, in fact, a quite firm private principle, arrived at through careful study of exactly how many talented, hardworking provincial men of modest birth had spent entire careers waiting patiently for merit to be recognized on its own terms, and dying, mostly, in the same modest circumstances they'd started in. The principle was this: that information, correctly gathered and correctly timed, was the one currency available to a man without inherited rank that could purchase, in a single well-managed transaction, what patient merit alone might never earn across a lifetime of waiting.

 

He had spent the better part of two years cultivating exactly the kind of careful, unglamorous attention to court gossip that most ambitious young men considered beneath their dignity: who was seen where, whose glance lingered a fraction too long on whom, which minor courtier's fortunes were rising and which were quietly, almost imperceptibly, beginning to fall. It was tedious work, and it earned him, in the district where he'd first attempted it, a reputation as a man overly interested in matters that were, strictly speaking, none of his business. Malicorne had absorbed this reputation without particular distress, on the theory that being underestimated was, for a man in his position, considerably more useful than being taken seriously too early.

What he had gathered, over those two years, amounted to a detailed private map of exactly where royal attention was beginning to settle, months before the court's more visible occupants had fully registered the pattern themselves. He understood, correctly, that this map was worth a great deal to precisely the right person, deployed at precisely the right moment, and he understood, with equal correctness, that deploying it too early, to the wrong person, or with insufficient leverage, would waste an asset he had spent two patient years assembling.

 

Montalais was, in Malicorne's careful private assessment, exactly the right person: ambitious enough to recognize the value of what he was offering, connected enough to actually make use of it, and, this mattered rather more to Malicorne's calculations than he generally admitted aloud, sufficiently similar in temperament to his own that he trusted her to understand the transaction in the spirit he intended it, as a fair exchange between two people determined to rise through means other than the accident of favorable birth, rather than as anything so crude as a bribe.

He laid out what he knew with the same careful, unhurried precision he brought to everything, watching her face for the specific signs of real interest rather than performed interest, a distinction he had trained himself, across years of careful observation, to read with reasonable accuracy. She listened without interrupting, which he took as a good sign, and asked, when he had finished, exactly the kind of pointed, practical questions that confirmed his private assessment of her capabilities, not questions about the information's reliability, which she seemed to accept without argument, but questions about how, precisely, it might be used, and by whom, and to what specific end.

By the time the hour had run its course, Malicorne had secured not the immediate position he'd hoped for, but something he privately considered nearly as valuable: a true working partnership with someone positioned to make far better use of his information than he could manage entirely on his own, combined with her clear understanding that he expected, in due course, to be properly compensated for his continued usefulness. It was not the swift, dramatic elevation a more impatient man might have hoped for. It was, Malicorne reflected, walking away from the encounter with the particular satisfaction of a man who has correctly executed a plan built on patient calculation rather than luck, exactly the kind of careful, incremental advancement that men of his birth achieved, when they achieved anything at all, not through a single decisive stroke, but through a long accumulation of correctly timed, correctly targeted small investments, each one building toward a position that patient merit alone, he remained privately and quite reasonably convinced, would never have secured him within a single lifetime.

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